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    March 25

    诗歌一首　　绝对原创

    本来春眠不觉晓；
    ＭＤ窗外有鸟叫（注意鸟为多音字念diao );
    吵的老子睡不着；
    抓鸟捣巢做夜宵．
     
     
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    Lingyunwrote:
    精彩～～
    May 25
    top man_shangh​aiwrote:
    好诗~~
     
     
    Mar. 27
    徵 彭wrote:
    难道你们没有看出来我是歌颂现在市容环境变好了？住三类小区树上也有鸟了～
    Mar. 26
    雅君 朱wrote:
    这是一首十分注重人文气质的作品
    质朴的语言 直击人心
    充分表现出一个孕妇的焦躁与暴怒 对社会的抗争 对现实的不满
    作为一个资深文学评论 看了此作我流泪了
    不禁要说：
    请注意胎教
    Mar. 26
    rain shiwrote:
    额``这个准妈妈满蛮地
    Mar. 26

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